What the--

So I just realized that apparently Project Rooftop is more than something I'm interested in, it's something people search for? Cause I'm getting a whole lot of hits from people searching for it. So if you're here for that, hi. I'm not particularly good at this and in case you missed my explanation, I'm going back through all the old contests to get into practice. So nothing's up to date, I'm not doing Vampirella or anything unless I catch up really fast. This is what I have so far:

Helpful comments would be greatly appreciated, or advice on technique, style, etc. Sorry for luring you here with misleading labels! I hope I have not entirely wasted your time. But then again, welcome to the internet.